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Insomnia

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As always,
thought stops me sleeping
#SixWordStories Word Prompt: always thought
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3wyl's avatar
That's quite interesting... I question what kinds of thoughts stop you from sleeping, but yeah, I like the concept and the way you've portrayed it here. The structure is a good one, as it introduces a slight hiccup as if reflecting the hiccup to your sleeping rhythm.

Awesome stuff. :)