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Rode into the sunset...
now what?
#SixWordStories' Theme Prompt: Fairy Tale
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Cleverly written... It invokes an interesting thought ^_^ indeed, what happens next? Awesome job
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Fantastic-Mrs-Fox Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010
Thank you!
(lovely user name, by the way :))
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :smooch: and thank you for the lovely comment :hug: took forever to choose it XD
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3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
It's interesting how you've structured and set this out. I feel as if it would be better if the ellipses was at the beginning of the second line instead of the end of the first line.

I like the question and how you've invited us to participate in the story as well, in that way. :nod:
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Fantastic-Mrs-Fox Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010
Thanks very much for the commentary... now that I think about it, I take your point!
I originally wanted to submit something much more gooey, but the others stories were so inventive I had to push myself a bit :D
Hope you're having happy holidays :heart:
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3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
You too! :hug:

I get what you mean. :nod:
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dragon-fly-to-me Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
Exactly! Now what?
Great job. :heart:
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ferncat Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
I like this one, Nat. I think you should write a sequel ;)
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